Your book she caught the bad boys eyes has a beautiful story line , the only problem was that they were to many prov's and I ended up being utterly confused , by the 6 chapter I lost all interest . if you ever think of re - writing the book it would be nice make it in only 2 prov's or better yet make it in a third person prov so all the characters thoughts and emotions can be expressed . I am an aspiring writer and your books helped bring my display of characters and their pasts to a whole new level , their back stories brought light to the book and I'm sure to many more people , I just wished you didn't switch prov's so much ...
@Candystarz :)