rabbitkookies2006

Hey guys I have created a another book called *once in a lifetime* 
          	
          	Pls go and check it!! :-)
          	
          	And *stage presence will be updated soon.....;-)

ScarlettBlackDaisy

Just noticed you've given my story a chance. So I'm dropping by to let you know that I truly appreciate it and hope you'll find my work worth-it. Feedback and comments are more than welcome. Once again, thank you so much for making my day better ❤️

Atlantaes

hey lovely,
          keep up the good work! Your writing is great and the story was really cute. My tips would be to go more into imagery in your writing. You've got really great dialogue and a plot sequence down, now bring it to life by describing the surroundings more and going into a little more depth of the characters.

rabbitkookies2006

@Atlantaes Thank you so so so So much for reading my book Atlantaes! I think today will be my luckiest day~ I had great morning because of you. The thought that you gave a try to my book itself made me so much happier. AND thanks for your vote too~ Dude guess who is screaming right NOW?! Me!!! adjsfgeahjchfuaeigwalurg!!.
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