rachelcallaney

@strikingswirl No, it's great, storyline and everything, but if you don't mind a bit of criticism, just some minor editing mistakes, but on the whole, amazing!

strikingswirl

LOL. I literally just corrected them about three hours ago, because I decided to randomly re-read it. Yeah, but I usually make sure to always edit them as best as I can. Thank you again ;o
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writingcrazed

Thank you for takin your time to read my story. It means a lot :)

writingcrazed

@R4chie Aw! Just make sure you get some sleep!
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rachelcallaney

No problem! I'm staying up late because I couldn't put the book down!
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rachelcallaney

@strikingswirl No, it's great, storyline and everything, but if you don't mind a bit of criticism, just some minor editing mistakes, but on the whole, amazing!

strikingswirl

LOL. I literally just corrected them about three hours ago, because I decided to randomly re-read it. Yeah, but I usually make sure to always edit them as best as I can. Thank you again ;o
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strikingswirl

Thank you for reading and voting for my story 'The Billionaire Boy'. I'm really happy you seemed to enjoy it and hopefully you stick along with it, and continue to like future chapters. Maybe even love at some point. I really appreciate the feedback and the fact you took the time to click that little star on the side. (: