raggi1997

@daydreamer1977  I have used the first 2 parts because I wasn't that happy with my own first two thank you 

@daydreamer1977  thanks for all your help i will defo use your ideas 

thank you

@daydreamer1977  no problem will you please read my book and let me know what you think it is my first book on here and im not sure if I should carry on writting it x