حلو كل شي كاتبتي، افكار كثيير حلوة ومعبرة، بس انتبهي لل use of articles, captalization, use of do and does, the use of tenses when asking a question...
Otherwise, it's all more than amazing! You do have great thoughts indeed.
As you've said you are not perfect neither do I! So thank you for your perfect thoughts, and for sharing them with us, get going girl.