@DiDi_XD You're an awesome writer, don't doubt yourself!! And different people have different preferences on writing styles, so it's not really about being better or worse than others!!
And seriously, who needs relationships when I can live through your characters and pretend to be, for example, an attractive young man with 'fire' powers, a pet mini dragon that I can talk to through my mind, a hot mate named Mason, and two weird but amazing friends like Charlie and Brendon?? haha :P but seriously, I love Aidan's character... and Milo's, and Skylar's, and EVERYONE lol