Raine

@JAPartridge oh thanks :) I'm not on Wattpad quite as much these days- especially for writing. Mostly doing reviews on here these days so that was probably the comments that you read :) Will get back into Fresh Canvas soon. Happy writing! 

Hi.  I hope you don't mind the follow.  I was reading one of the books you commented on and I thought your comments were particularly insightful.  Then I check out out the synopsis for Fresh Canvas and could tell right away you have a very clear and engaging voice.  I look forward to reading more. :)

@shimizuyukiko would you like me to message you feedback, or leave it on comments on each chapter?

@shimizuyukiko happy to. I have exams for the rest of the week, but I have put a reminder in my phone to read it on the weekend :) 

hello :) if it's not too much to ask... would give me a feedback to my story? I would really like to know if I managed to put it well together up to this point. there are only 4 chapters published, but some are quite long. it's mature, sci-fi, fantasy btw.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/41501858-the-cries-of-the-earth

Thank you so much for reading and for the votes on Singing on the Roof! :) xoxo

Peoples, I need something good to read. Send me recommendations maybe? Xx

Thanks for fanning :)

Hey! I just uploaded the first chapter of a story. Please leave me a message and let me know what you think. If it's boring let me know. If it sounds like it might be going somewhere but it's not quite there yet, let me know that too. As I've said before, all constructive criticism welcome! Let me have it :P

hey, Raine ;) Thanks for being my fan. I'm glad you like "The Bro Code"