rainxclouds0312
Just a reminder for myself. Halfway done with the story already... just a few more chapters to go, and I’m finished. This is seriously the coolest thing I’ve ever created. Good job, Megha!
rainxclouds0312
83Vuser
second chapter of my little horror story
https://www.wattpad.com/story/376744665-the-sadness-before-dawn
83Vuser
how are you doing?
I invite you to read my book
The first chapter is now available
https://www.wattpad.com/story/376744665-the-sadness-before-dawn
rainxclouds0312
Heyy to everyone who is reading,
I’ve just made some edits to the latest chapter. I’ve refined the opening scene and added more detail to Mira’s emotional journey. I hope these changes make the story even more engaging for you!
Please check it out and let me know what you think!
Thank you for being here!!! Happy reading!
KracklinDark
Hello, I’m here to drop that review for “The World She Wished For.”
Assuming this is your first time writing, it’s pretty good. The main character, Mira, has her goals and motivations laid out and the setting shake up has potential. I’m not sure how you’re going to handle it, but I hope that the shake up doesn’t mean that were going to leave all the characters that you have built up for 13 chapters. Especially since you have set up a potential romance/enemy conflict that needs more time to be developed.
The best advice you probably need is on how to make your story description clearer. Right now, all it tells you is that unimaginable things are about to happen to an ordinary life. What unimaginable things? Whose ordinary life? I was really blindsided by the story when it started to develop the one-sided romance because even though romance isn’t ordinary it also isn’t unimaginable. Put some indication on what the plot is and you’re good to go.
rainxclouds0312
@KracklinDark Thank you so much for your lovely feedback! I really appreciate you taking the time to review my story. I'm glad to hear that you like Mira's character and the direction of the setting shake up. Don't worry, I definitely plan to continue developing the characters, and the romance/enemy conflict will be a significant part of the plot moving forward. As for the story description, you're absolutely right. I can see how it might be too vague, and I’ll work on making it clearer to better reflect the plot and the unique twists in the story. Thank you again for your helpful advice! <33
VARHARARM
hay!!...can you review my story and give feedback on where should i correct it ?...(i saw you in many fantasy stories , thats why :) )
VARHARARM
@rainxclouds0312 thank you so much for loving my story! It truly means everything to me that you're enjoying it and feeling the suspense. I'm totally with you - I think adding more depth to the world and characters will make it even more amazing. And guess what? That's exactly what's coming up next! I'm really excited to share more about the places and people that make this story tick. Get ready for some serious immersion! Thanks again for your awesome feedback and support. It keeps me going!❤❤❤❤