Bridger Montana

I never got the fan base I wanted... so, no broken promises, no giving you something you didn't earn.

I think you need to update this!

@lacierose: okay thats also part of why i'm stalling...

You better freaking upload the second part. I think it would be better if you had more of it up. Also... I have the edited part still. Haven't gone back through it yet. But I will give it to you in a few days. And then you have to promise to work on it more...or maybe I will keep it. haha

to all of my fans, I have decided to have you shamelessly pimp my work. Once I have a total of ten fans I will upload the second chapter.

I have been @Bella36: doing my best to help her improve... But apparently my critiquing style is very harsh.

wow i love the story!! Your sister said it was really good and it is!! Talented family! :P

UPLOAD MORE!!!