caliexroses

‪hi, sorry to bother you, but i was just wondering if you would check out my book, “Shattered Love”. thank you <3‬

ralucapop15

@calrosalie At chapter 1 you need to change wasn't to weren't here 'I let out a sigh. The past 3 months of summer break wasn't the best'. Besides that you don't have any grammar mistakes. My opinion to the book is that I think many people will read your story because the plot is really interesting especially that mystery about Augustus and the hatred from Jami towards Augustus, I wonder what happened between them and what happened to her mom.
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caliexroses

yes, please! thanks again, it means a lot 
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ralucapop15

@calrosalie hi! You didn't bothered me and yes, of course I'll check out your book. Do you want me to give you my impression on the book after I read a few chapters?
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