Hey, I have a proposal for you.
If you would allow me, I would like to rewrite your story 'why is love so hard' in a way that's easier to understand and add depth and emotion to allow the readers to really connect to the story.
I love the story so far but find it a bit hard to read at certain points and if you would allow me, I'd be happy to write it while still sticking to the original plot, only adding detail and depth.
I also won't ask for any credit whatsoever it's still completely your story, I would just like to help if you'd let me.
Feel free to msg me on Insta @Dino_Daddy_69 if you would like to talk a little more on the topic, no hate towards you or your work <3