I will be rewriting the entirety of chapter 1 along with editing a few stuff in part 1. Yes, I know, I should have done this before I worked on part 2, but I was really impatient to get part 1 over with aaaaaaand my brain decided to come up with better ideas later because it said so. I will write the rewritten chapter 1 on a Google Doc, so I wouldn't have to remove the whole chapter and build progress with a little note underneath. I apologize in advance for anyone who liked this current version of chapter 1, but I just can't let this chapter bother me any longer and I know I need to fix it. So look out for that!
(Also yes, I'll still be working on chapter 11 as well. This is gonna take a loooooong time so please be patient with me. Thank you! :)