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Hey! It's Camila (camilaparkerangel) I'm sooooo sorry for abruptly deactivating my account. Had stuff going on and yeah just... yeah I'm gonna leave it at that. But I made another account a long time ago and just recently started using it and now I found you so... HAI AGAIN :D lol while I'm here would you guys mind critiquing some of my new stuff? P.S. it's really good to have found you again :)

Hey tout le monde! I hope everyone is doing great!
          We wanted to ask everyone one favour,
          We have just posted the first chap of "IDA" which we have written together.
          I would love to know what you think about it:
          http://www.wattpad.com/56916690-ida-the-daughter-of-hope-chapter-1-new-beginnings

I was wondering if you could critique the epilogue I wrote for the Divergent series..it would mean so much to me, as it's the first time I've tried writing and I really need someone's honest opinion. xx
          http://www.wattpad.com/35714591-always-divergent-the-epilogue-part-1-four-and-six

Hello guys.. I m back again ... i hope you could critique my poem 
          I hope I have improved.. 
          http://www.wattpad.com/53293905-after-heartbreak

Hello! if you have spare time, could you pretty please critique any of my poems? I'd really appreciate it and I'd love to improve my writing a lot.^^ Thank you. Here are the links:
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/12888895-the-sands-of-summer
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/13016386-shades-of-autumn
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/13034943-tales-of-winter
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/13059164-the-scent-of-spring

http://www.wattpad.com/story/12573088-collection-of-my-poems
          if you could please help me and give me some constructive critique.. :)

http://www.wattpad.com/38146424-harmony-at-dusk-and-dawn~ Hello! I saw that you critique poems, and I was just wondering what you'd rate mine ^^ It's another day&night sun&moon poem, but if you don't mind i'd like some feedback on how to improve.

http://www.wattpad.com/37190069-there-you-are-death
          can you look at the first and third poems please and give constructive critique. thanks i'm new.

hello, could you please read my poems and leave some feedback?... the links are :
          1) http://www.wattpad.com/17485599-pessimistic-works-1-confessions-of-an-insomniac
          
          2) http://www.wattpad.com/18912468-pessimistic-works-1-confessions-of-an-insomniac-2

http://www.wattpad.com/31831100-be-happy
          http://www.wattpad.com/31830312-diary-of-me
          There you go! :)