randomsfandoms123

I really don't know if anyone reading take me to Hawaii sees these but if you do:
          	
          	I'm having insane writers block for chapter 27 and I'm away this weekend so this update will be delayed. Sorry to all and I hope you continue to enjoy this fic <3
          	
          	Much love, Randy

Thecurlinato

@randomsfandoms123 I don’t have many ideas yet but I will write them if and when I get them. Or not. Idk yet
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randomsfandoms123

@Thecurlinato I have a vague idea of what I want to happen but if you have ideas I'd love to hear them!!!!!!
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Thecurlinato

@randomsfandoms123 do you need ideas for when you get back?
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SiRiUsLy_uh_fAnGiRl

Heyyy!! I hadnt been reading “Take Me to Hawaii” because something weird had happened that i couldnt log onto wattpad, and all of a sudden its working again, so im binging the whole bookkeep up the good work! You write beautifully!!!

randomsfandoms123

@SiRiUsLy_uh_fAnGiRl oh my god tysm!! Honestly, no pressure to catch up but im glad ur enjoying it <33 means smmm!!! My chapter are slower to update recently bc I'm having severe writers block  but again tysm for the love and support ❤️
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something44444

I've been reading "Take Me to Hawaii" and I love it so much, but I've been writing my own story and was wondering if you could check it out maybe correct me or give me advice because my friends and family have seen it and I think its kinda biased on what they're telling me.

something44444

@randomsfandoms123 okie dokie thanks again for helping me with the story.
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randomsfandoms123

@something44444 hello againnn!! I've been keeping up with your story as much as I can   but did reread last night. I like where it's going but I think with the type of story you are writing foreshadowing is going to be your best friend. In your Ethan Pov chapter you mention that he's lost his ability to mind read: now would be a great time to hint as to why eg: something is out of place in his room or he notices something in Abigails house. Idk what caused his loss of power so I can't exactly tell you what to do but dropping hints of the reason now will keep readers on their toes and will provide a more satisfying conclusion once it's revealed. As for Abby's character and her home situation the show not tell tecjnique would work really well here eg: instead of having her complain about the shouting and abuse from her family hint to bruises on her arm with her use of makeup/colour correcting concealer to hide wounds or have her flinch at sudden noises or get agitated easily. To be honest, the best way to learn new techniques is to keep reading other people's work and note how they use different techniques. I'm really excited to see where the story goes and hope you keep up with writing because as cliché as the saying is practice truly does make perfect <3
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something44444

@randomsfandoms123 so I think I got most of my character's story down and I want to know if you could check it out and maybe give me like some constructive criticism or what not  and if you could tell me what I could fix to make it sound more interesting or stuff like that
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randomsfandoms123

I really don't know if anyone reading take me to Hawaii sees these but if you do:
          
          I'm having insane writers block for chapter 27 and I'm away this weekend so this update will be delayed. Sorry to all and I hope you continue to enjoy this fic <3
          
          Much love, Randy

Thecurlinato

@randomsfandoms123 I don’t have many ideas yet but I will write them if and when I get them. Or not. Idk yet
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randomsfandoms123

@Thecurlinato I have a vague idea of what I want to happen but if you have ideas I'd love to hear them!!!!!!
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Thecurlinato

@randomsfandoms123 do you need ideas for when you get back?
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randomsfandoms123

Chapter 35 of Take Me to Hawaii (TMTH) has been updated and rewritten because I didn't like it  <3 updates will be slower as I've got personal stuff going on and am figuring out how the rest of the plot will go (aka I made alterations without thinking of the consequences :p )
          
          -Randy

randomsfandoms123

A/N: Take Me to Hawaii
          
          Hello to my favourite people! TMtH will be having slower updates because I need to sort things for college. Thank you so so much for reading and interacting with this fic and my account it means so much to see people enjoying this as much as I do <3

SiRiUsLy_uh_fAnGiRl

Thanks for the follow I feel like we’re the only few tratie shippers still on Wattpadkinda sad really but… love you !!!heheh

SiRiUsLy_uh_fAnGiRl

Hahaha I’m glad that I can be an inspiration
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randomsfandoms123

@SiRiUsLy_uh_fAnGiRl  honestly so true!! Everytime I feel like I can't finish writing this fic I just remind myself that the whole reason I started writing this is because of your message and I'm like no I need to finish it! Love you ! Thank you so much!
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randomsfandoms123

! Weekly update on pause for Take Me To Hawaii !
          
          Thanks to everyone who has been reading Take Me To Hawaii, your love and support is inspiring me so much to keep this series going.
          
          I am going to be taking a break from weekly updates so I can write more parts and develop the plot further. Originally this story was only going to be 12 parts however we are close to approaching this number and I'd rather expand the story fully than rush the ending.
          
          If you enjoy my writing style I have an AO3 where I've written a handful of Percabeth oneshots and a couple for BNHA. This is under the same handle I use on here.
          
          Thank you again for all the love and I'll see you all shortly <3