Broski Bitch

Arrest the killers of Breonna Taylor. Sign the petition.
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ALRIGHT YA'LL
          ENOUGH IS ENOUGH
          last monday George Floyd was murdered at the hands of police. he screamed repeatedly saying he couldnt breathe. Riots are happening. more people are being harmed. this is not okay. this is the world our parents are leaving us with. the events of history are a circle. America, land of the free. I dont think so. innocent people are being killed for skin color. people are being ripped from their families. cops have become not the people who save us but the people who harm us and abuse power. I am done with it. "this is america" - childish gambino

Thank you for the follow

"while it is good to wish, sometimes shooting stars don't work. In those cases you cant dwell but live life to the fullest and never forget those before you." - me and my brother...
          God its been lonely without him. This boy was the bravest. The day he died was the worst of my entire life. I sang him to sleep just as he used to do to me on those horrible long nights when i couldn't even close my eyes. His favorite song. I miss him. So So So much. He was 16 when he died. He was my rock. He held my hand when i was getting shots and let me cry in his arms when i was upset. He wasn't just my brother, he was my best friend. He made me who i am. if he was here right now, He would laugh at this whole shabang and say that it was dumb. I mean hes not wrong. He saved my life so many times. I miss him with every part off my being. I love you Austin...
          R.I.P 2.12.20
          so i have decided that i will not being posting for awhile because of somethings that have gone down these past couple months. I may change my mind or i may not. who knows? not me

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          I am freaked out.
          I have no clue what is going on anymore.

I have had an extremly shitty week. I have lost some people and been hurt by others. At this moment I have no will to live. But I'll get over it. There are other people who need me, so im not going to do anything. School starts tomorrow so I won't be updating for a while. I'll start updating on Tuesdays. Have fun with your life young children. bye bye

reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! i have the most extreme writers block. and have had a really shitty week. halp. also just found out my best friend hates me and stated most of the rumors about me last year. i do not wan tot go back to all this fricken drama. UGH

so i want to start posting this tododeku fanfic that ive been working on, but i don't have the time to keep updating everyday cause i start school tmrw. Halp

Okey I read your story I think it IS a book with pontential and I am looking forward to the other chapters I didn't really give any feedback yet and I am planning to give the REAL feedback in this section So not aĺl your future readers will see it and you can openly tell me off and say thing like 
          LIKE HELLL I AM DOING THAT or something 
          I think the story is really good ( I WILL NEVER CHANGE THE STORY OF A BOOK I HAVE WORKED WITH OTHER AUTHERS IN THE PAST BUT I ONLY PLAN ON HELPING THE BOOK NOT CHANGING IT) just so you know I still have some things to say about your writing style and hiw you maybe can improve it ... 
          But I think that if I start about this now It will become a bit to much...
          So tell me what you thought about my previous tips and try to focus on that when you have something to say just say it ok?
          And I know the tasks I have giving aren't really fun and it takes a bit of work but I think that it will make your book wel known
          If you don't really feel like working or improving on your book any more tell me and I will stop bothering you ...

Like I already told you I don't really have much time so I can't look at your book in detail but about the intro I noticed you don't really say why she ran away was she bullied and did it became to much ? Did she embares herself before her crush ? Was she always embarsed of herself and one day she woke up and was like I dont want to live like this anymore? Also explain BRIEFLY what happend that made her tge trigger go of because she could have felt like that for a long time but what made her do what she did and also what did she do? Did she ran away to live with maybe her other parent or an aunt or something ... Did she start living alone and maybe you can mention how did she accomplish her goal ... Just some more information to make the readers curious would be enough to have people really start reading your book Okey I will stop here because I really need to be going think about what I said also I didn't start reading ypur book yet because I didn't have the time right now so about the introduction I don't know have related it is but telling a bit more to make the readers curious and exated is enough ...
          Also you can put your opion about my advice if you are like 
          NO I actually wanted it to be like .... or do .... 
          just say it there are a lot of ways to write a book and a lot of tactics I know to help dmso if some of my advice isn't doing it for you we could think about it and figer something out...
          BUT BELIEVE ME THE TAGS AND THE COVER ARE IMPORTANT TO ATTRACT ATTENTION 
          (I cut it in 2 so it could fit ...)