Rang

Hi there‍♂️im a new writer,tips?

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          New vid is up on my YT channel, please watch it, like, subscribe and share to your friends, thanks

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          Please check that out, and please like & subscribe my channel, thanks

I have been writing a poetry book named Delicate and would really love it if you checked it out ❤️ You don't have to, but I would appreciate some feedback :)

Hey can you please check out my poetry... I'd love some feedback
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/91752591-love-poetry

You should make them longer or something... They are wayyyy to short but they are good