@SaymyAli What I meant about 'getting tired' is that every one or two chapters, I need to stop reading... might be of the long sentences and to comprehend the story. I don't know where you want to lead this story...earlier chapters, I don't feel the excitement to read this story...some good stories, I love to read them once and for all without stop/interruptions. I think you should know that English is not my first language. I prefer shorter sentences. I think I would like to rate 7/10. Although I'm not the expertise in writing...I think you do have the elements of mystery, surprised.. emotional too but not enough to make me cry.
