ratzi98

UMMM BTRS IS GONNA GET ALMOST A 100K READS UMMM WHATTTTT ?! I AM JUST SHOOK AF THATS ALL

AmmuSaran

Hello Ritika! I'm Ammu from India. Iam pretty sure that you understand the difficulties of a non native English writer. Starting from grammar to spelling errors, everything is so messed up in the start. Iam a budding writer and I request you to help me improve my work, eh...its more of a constructive criticism I guess. I hope you respond to my humble plea. We can mutually follow each other if you want, so that we can check out each other's works :)
          PS: 'WHEN EARTH MEETS THE SKY' is my damned but dream creation.

mahreen97

Umm, can you elaborate by what you mean by different typos in the intro?

ratzi98

@mahreen97 well, here you have written : When I first laid my eyes on her, sparks flew like the fourth of july, something changed in me forever.
            
            It should be 'July'...the J should be in capitals as it is a proper nown
            
            and here you forgot to put this in inverted commas "...."
            
            Love is timeless and magical"
            
            
            Just very small things as I said but they count a lot. All the best!
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AuthoressRose

@ratzi98 can you read my stories and tell me what you think? 

AuthoressRose

@ratzi98 its okay! Dont sweat it! One of the stories are deleted tho
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ratzi98

@AuthoressRose ^OH MY GOD I CANT BELIEVE HOW I DID NOT SEE THIS. I AM SOOOO SOOOOO SORRY BABE :"(
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mahreen97

Hi.Can you add my story his goddess and comment?

ratzi98

@mahreen97 alright thanks will get to you asap :)
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ratzi98

@mahreen97 can i get a link to the story please? thanks so much :)
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