raveenaelijah

New chapter uploaded 
          	I just published "Chapter 20" of my story "Arylie Os- A New Beginning ". https://www.wattpad.com/1507049605?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=raveenaelijah

raveenaelijah

Hey guys..please read the previous message..also should i rewrite and post Beyhadh?? I was thinking removing the whole shadow watcher thing..more focus on Arylie..nok jhok..please do comment..

NetravaliHombal

@raveenaelijah I agree with Sibonkhosi.
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Sibonkhosi

@raveenaelijah you're an amazing writer and as a writer it's always amazing to try out new ideas personally I love that book and however you write it, will be amazing, you can focus more on arylie try to show how they grow their love from just being doctor - patient, how they cross the professional line to friendship, then finally to something name worthy, add their nok jhok as well throughout their journey, it'll be interesting to read otherwise you're doing an amazing job
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sumaan490

@raveenaelijah I like all the stories written by you, do whatever you feel is right.
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raveenaelijah

Hey guys..sò i am thinking that Nia is forced by Purab to betray the Rathore's as he threatened, Raveena, her parents, and Mahesh life..and she gives in..which puts both Imlie and Raveena's life in danger..will you like to see that??

NetravaliHombal

@raveenaelijah Put an end to the character of Purab. He is so negative.
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raveenaelijah

@Sibonkhosi please read the first message written by me?? And give your suggestions
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Sibonkhosi

@raveenaelijah I'd love to see some thrilling parts in the story but then Nia is a cool girl I have come to like jer
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raveenaelijah

I am going to be bare honest today..i feel like am losing my touch with writing..except for few readers no likes to comment..and i am feeling so demotivated that i don't even feel like giving an update..my last two updates were so bad..i feel so low these days..

Sibonkhosi

@raveenaelijah so sorry dear I personally love your writing and I still do re-read your old stories I just feel bad that your efforts aren't reciprocated accordingly, a lot of people do read your stories but only a few give engagement, honestly along with you, I also feel unhappy but I wish you'd continue writing because it will sharpen your writing skills otherwise you're doing amazing my dear ♥️ ♥️
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DivyaUdeshi9

@raveenaelijah hi dear..don't worry everything will be fine..don't stop writing dear please
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