raven464

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I have come to apologize on my absent behavior. I have a school life, homework and a bunch of other shit to deal with. I am sorry hope you understand.

Alonda1134

Your story is pretty cool lol MC is high key violent though lol I’d recommend making her more of the cliché damsel in distress type a girl a little. I’m sure many more would read it because they can relate to that position (myself included haha) your plot is amazing though and the story is actually really funny

raven464

@Alonda1134 thank you for your advice I will see what I can do
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