@CrazyGirl17 I just started reading it and so far I like it. I thought the necklace was a good touch. While most people would say that the character went back for something usefull in modern times (like a cellphone or wallet), you used a momento from her dead mother as her reasoning. In dueing so, you successfully made her seem like she treasured more in life then just money and items, while creating a glimpse at her past. So far, well done.