rayray111

If you can please comment and let me know if chapter five is any good because I think it's.... well weird. I had to put all of the unanswered questions from the frist four chapters in this one. So please comment and let me know.
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          	Ray

bluegirl09

Hey Ray! I'm just having a look at your stories - which are wonderful by the way! -  and was wondering if you could do the same for me? The couple I'm uploading at the moment are 'With Teeth' and 'Thicker Than Water' and both are fantasy style, but of course there's a romantic sideline to make things interesting too! Thanks a million in advance, and keep up the great work!!