LusstyKitty
Hi, hope you are in great health. Just read Seaside Seduction. I liked the premise of your work. The characters could be more dimensional (but it is a short story,so....). Anyway, you could improve the sex scenes and the dailogues need some work but yor are moving forward in the right direction. Your Creativity was hilighted in your work. I am excited about future works from you. All the best wishes