@readerandcritic30
Being upset with my criticism isn’t going change the fact that your books aren’t good. Instead, do something productive with your time and learn to write a better story. I chose to read your books because they seemed promising at first, you still have potential.
I always congratulate good authors.
Reminder: I mute so that your books aren’t recommended to me again. If I we’re afraid of hurting your feelings, I wouldn’t openly critique your work.
Check out my reading lists! Lots of good ones have been added to "actual good reads"
My problem with movie/show fanfiction is that, even when it's well written, it'll be exact to the movie/show word-for-word and hardly any original scenes or very little originality. The OC character will have 2 seconds of spotlight but the rest will be exact to how the movie/show plays out.
Most of y’all don’t know how to write actual shy and/or sweet female MC’s. Shoutout to the ones who know how to do it right and truly understand these personalities, and are able to write these types of characters without making them cringy(i.e. “authors” who think character growth and development means removing their sweet disposition, making them unnecessarily rude and bxtchy, having cringe outbursts, and making them suddenly swear like sailors): @Lophie10 @mates25 @esssea @angeltwist @illiteratehomebody Y’all are incredible authors! You know and understand shy/sweet/innocent people and present it beautifully and accurately. And y’all offer some of the best writing I’ve seen!
The Colleen Hoover books are overrated.
If you're looking for a really good Marvel fanfiction to read(and it's a RH), I highly recommend The Girl With Six Marks by @Alynelovesyou The author's soulmate series is probably the best-written Marvel multi-soulmate fanfiction!
When a book has potential and good grammar but it’s very rushed, has cringe dialogue and monologue, and the story telling is terrible.
If I come across another book with the description “___ was a normal girl.” …
Check out Beauty and the Price by @Lophie10. A phenomenal read filled with all of our guilty pleasures, it’s aesthetically pleasing and properly written. Warning: you WILL get hooked and anticipate more. Lucky for us, updates are frequently too!