Ok seriously there's one thing, that bother me SO MUCH about some fanfictions. I HATE it when people write, "then Ezria does this," or "Ezria does that." Like its Ezra and Aria, or Aria and Ezra. NOT EZRIA. Well it's okay if it's like the title of a story, but when you write it IN THE BOOK.
Sorry if I offended anyone, I don't mean any specific story, there are many...