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recklessmarshmallow
Jan 10, 2018 07:58AM
This is my first actual short story. I would love to know what you think I could have done better or differently. I am open to new ideas and criticism. Thank you ❤https://www.wattpad.com/story/13483...View all Conversations
Story by Jessie Boesel
Achilles
Achilles doesn't know how to act when his cousin Patroclus dies, so he does the only thing he can do; Fight.