Dear Savage,
Thank you for being so supportive! I'm joyful to hear how my books have inspired you to write your book, I'm just a 15-year-old teenage girl who writes stories for passion, and seeing someone using it as an inspiration makes my day!
I read the book you published, it was awesome and had a very nice lore, I would suggest you describe the surroundings, like when we are in a dangerous place, try describing the details of it creating a vision in the reader's mind. Your story is captivating and brings the excitement of what is going to come next in the reader's mind, I loved how you did not add the JJK characters once the story started and thought for a moment to create a proper base for the story, also try making the chapters a little longer than how you usually write.
I hope you continue your book as it is one of the most exciting fan-fiction stories I have read! Once again, thank you for all your love and support and I hope your book will succeed.
Warmest regards,
Hazel