Sinikelencounter
Are you okay?
redeyesofg59
redeyesofg59
You know I've always wondered... First-person perspective or third?
redeyesofg59
@kayliesrxx Couldn't agree more.
kayliesrxx
@redeyesofg59 first person :)
kayliesrxx
what happened to omnivore? is that what part II is in carnivore? cause either ive literally been hallucinating or omnivore was deleted and just revised
kayliesrxx
@kayliesrxx for as long as you are burnt out, i wouldnt bother with the writing because that will just end up quickly into a writers block lol, just seriously prioritise yourself, who cares if a bunch of teenagers are begging you to update (idk if you care ab that, i know its happening to so many wattpad authors bro)
redeyesofg59
@kayliesrxx I fear I've been burnt out for a minute but refuse to actually admit it. All I've done writing wise in the past two months is conjure up other story ideas, but I can't really post those because none of them are fully fleshed out.
kayliesrxx
@kayliesrxx makes sense! i appreciate the reply lmao! but honestly just update when you can manage it, or leave it to rot forever, as long as you arent burnt out! prioritise yourself gang
Wwyynnonnaa
Come back to meeeeeeeee <333
redeyesofg59
Carnivore is revised :P
Onto part II. This is gonna take a bit longer tho. Got some stuff going on, I fear.
Rosesare_roses
@redeyesofg59 omg yay bouta binge read!
Rosesare_roses
5 more chapters left to revise i see . Can't wait to read it again once you're all done. Ty for your hard work .
redeyesofg59
@Rosesare_roses you rock and I love you
redeyesofg59
As I revise Carnivore, I highly recommend rereading it as soon as I'm done. I'm not majorly changing plot points (I don't think), but I'm fixing a lot of inconsistencies and rewriting a lot of the conflicting dialogue in the first half of the book. I looked through some feedback, and I agree with the majority of the things that were said. I don't like how Riley and Alexei handled Tycho. It didn't match the kind of characters I want them to be. Basically, they were assholes, and I'd like to change that because that's not what they should be. Thank you for your support :)
redeyesofg59
@Rosesare_roses My goal is to make the main cast a little more bearable lol
redeyesofg59
@miss_sei yeah, it was a hot mess. My bad. It'll be back though
Rosesare_roses
@redeyesofg59 Omg I cant wait to reread this again with the new revision ( cause I have reread this alot)!
redeyesofg59
For my next work, poly or mono?
6noodles9
@redeyesofg59 polyy
Ieaturmammastits
@redeyesofg59 POLYYYY
oddlee_
i mean i would appreciate another poly book but if you feel like writing mono, that’s perfect too and i’ll read it just the same
redeyesofg59
i'm baaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAaaaack : )
miss_sei
@redeyesofg59 welcome baaacck authorr
TinyBookGremlin
@redeyesofg59 Back again! Tell a friend!
PandaCrossiant
I LOV YOUR WRITING
redeyesofg59
@PandaCrossiant I LOVE YOU