Craftyone35
Your books make me laugh, cry and not want to put my phone down. Then I have to put it down because I need a moment to process because I could relate to certain parts of the stories. When I think this is the end she can wrap it all up with a bow and then the story continues with a twist. Then the characters get their HEA.
I LOVE the epilogues and bonus content at the end of each book. I enjoy reading books that show the characters future and how they have settled into the life you created for them. Cross overs are another part I love. As a reader you still get glimpses of characters you had a connection with be apart of someone else’s story and how their story is still moving along.
The hello series:
Something that doesn’t matter to plot but my brain picks up on weird things. The men all live in smaller places and the woman move in, along comes children. So by the end of the book it sounds like everyone has their own bedrooms. It’s almost like all these bedrooms have magically appeared. No house shopping for bigger homes or mention of them moving. Just something that didn’t carry through from beginning to bonus content. Silly, I know.
I look forward to reading the goodbye series next and everything you write in the future.
Continue creating your wonderful worlds filled with relatable characters and relationships.
redladiebug
Thank you sooooo much!!!! This is the best compliment I have ever received. It truly made my day. Thank you for your take on the patterns you picked up on. Sometimes writers can become blind to things because it made sense in our head but didn’t translate on the paper. I think the Hello Series worked like that because all of the MCs were older and established in life. So big moves necessarily didn’t make sense. But they could also have moved off page into bigger houses in the bonus content. I will keep that in mind as I write my future series. Right now I am working on my Maybe Series which introduces a whole new family whom I think you’ll enjoy as well. But so far the Goodbye Series is my favorite.
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