redpheonix97

@palominolane 
          	Oh the joys of cleaning! 
          	I love reading Avalon! You have written it so wonderfully that I feel like I'm entranced in her life and living vicariously through her! I'm currently reading Talon, and I'm really enjoying it! 
          	Haha, I'm perfectly happy being that little wattpadder that sits in the background though :) 
          	Avalon does sound like you're alter ego, you both talk the same! It's refreshing. 
          	Thank you for adding my book, reading and giving feedback! You really didn't have to, haha, it's just kinda my play story that I'm not really fussed in what direction it goes on wattpad :) but thank you :)

palominolane

I actually really enjoyed and had to read to the end to see what happened... :D
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redpheonix97

@palominolane 
          Oh the joys of cleaning! 
          I love reading Avalon! You have written it so wonderfully that I feel like I'm entranced in her life and living vicariously through her! I'm currently reading Talon, and I'm really enjoying it! 
          Haha, I'm perfectly happy being that little wattpadder that sits in the background though :) 
          Avalon does sound like you're alter ego, you both talk the same! It's refreshing. 
          Thank you for adding my book, reading and giving feedback! You really didn't have to, haha, it's just kinda my play story that I'm not really fussed in what direction it goes on wattpad :) but thank you :)

palominolane

I actually really enjoyed and had to read to the end to see what happened... :D
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redpheonix97

@palominolane 
          I absolutely adore your book, Avalon! I've just finished reading it, up to where your last update is, and I just want to keep reading! I'm now going through all your other books and putting them in my library! They are on the top of my must read list! 
          I love the way that you write and I wish that I had as much courage as Avalon does! Oh! I also love how it's based in Australia, and everything that you are saying I half understand and all the locations I can picture in my head because, I mean, come on it's Queensland! 
          Haha, I should probably stop now, because you will be busy! Anyways thanks for the message, I was going to message you because I love your book so much, but I was shy and socially awkward! Haha

palominolane

LOL Im on here kind of putting off all the cleaning I haven't done since uni exams... its hours and hours worth I reckon. Thanks heaps for reading Avalon... its like my relaxing story to write. Talon was my first ever attempt at writing and needs a tonne of work lol... but the more you write the better and easy it gets. Don't ever be shy lol not on here, Avalon btw is my alter ego, if something happens to me I do one thing but there is this part that always comes up with the craziest things to do or say ( I rarely ever do them lol). I have added your book and I will give you some feedback later on in the week :D
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palominolane

G'day Blue ;) Just wanted to drop by to say a big thanks for the follow, I really appreciate it. I hate the whole critique thing too .. well not really but when people say nasty stuff and not anything helpful that really gets my goat. I hope you enjoy writing on here as well as reading, good luck