Inii💋

Chandradhara just crossed 1k views ♡
          Iss khushi mein ek bonus chapter pesh kiya jata hai❤️

Gonna start Velvet Sins as soon as Chandradhara gets completed!
          Y'all will surely gonna love this book (smirk emoji)

Gave my book cover a mini glow-up with a few small tweaks!♡
          
          

hii! I finally got around to reading your story haha. 
          
          I really like the concept. I've honestly never read a romance with a director as the main character (considering I don't read romance much myself), but this one got me hooked from the first chapter. The opening line is intriguing and pulls me right in. Even though english isn't your first language, I think you're pretty good at it!! It flows perfectly, and you've got some good descriptions going on :)
          
          as for minor tweaking here and there, 
          
          you switch between past tense and present tense pretty frequently. Stick to past tense at all times. I also think you could cut down the bigger paragraphs so it's easier to read. And sometimes, the dialogues feel unnatural. one thing i find helpful is reading the dialogue out loud to yourself or even feeding it to a text to speech thingy. it's actually quite helpful. other than that, I'm looking forward to the story!! I can visualise everything that's happening which is a thing not many people can do. and the plot in general is pretty interesting. 
          
          that's it for now haha. good luck with your writing <3