nezzaahat
Hi. Can you take a look at my book? (He was starting while she was dying) it's my first. Can you give me feedback? I'll do the same if you like. Tell me how it was. And last, hope you like it. Enjoy.
Thanks.
*Btw I'm a Muslim. I'm so happy that I found someone! c:*
nezzaahat
yeah! I though like that! sometimes you just trust that person you don't know! thanks for your support!
redrosegardenpetals
@nezzaahat no i wouldn't call it stupid bec it's really not stupid. It's okay sometimes you can feel like you just can trust that stranger. And it's okay it really is. This even gives more uniqueness to your story doesn't make it typical.
nezzaahat
Yeah it was a stupid start! :D I actually wrote that part differently three maybe more times but I decided to write like this.
