@noorirshad I just read your poetry book and oh my goodness! I usually don't read books recommended to me unless I'm feeling curious, but your writing style is very unique. I find that on some of the chapters you put emphasis on key lines and it really does leave an impression. I think I was reading that chapter about the stars and at the end, I thought: "Wow, that's so good".
It's similar to another book I'm reading at the moment called 'she felt like feeling nothing' by r.h. Sin, which is also a compilation of poems about love.
But yeah, you're doing fine! I think when it comes to writing, it's good to just let it flow. By that I mean it's good to think about some factors, but overall if you have the need to write something down, then go for it. And if you feel the need to edit, then do that as well. But whatever technique you're using now to write your chapters seems to be working really well for you.
I honestly have no cons to your book, though. Maybe a few spelling mistakes, but that didn't stop me reading haha.
Keep going, you're doing great ♥