Kaela

@TheLocalGuerilla I will :D And you're welcome ^.^
          

Heya, no problemo! Read them whenever you like so. ;) And thank you for becoming a fan. :)

@tiffygreen It wouldn't be weird. You would just have to change a few things. Like the lining up part....
          
          It is an awesome story and the extensive vocabulary doesn't make it worse, it just makes it a bit confusing :D
          
          Keep up the good work, yes?

@redtetsiga You're right... I should maybe make her older. But I don't know if that will be weird? I would have to change the beginning at least... Anyway the reason those words are there in the first place is because when I wrote this story I was studying for the SATs and I was using the writing to help learn them  
          Hope that at least clears that up. Maybe when I'm done putting it up I'll change somethings. 

@tiffygreen No problem :D
          
          Also, I just noticed that your vocabulary is a bit old for an eleven year old. You have a wide range of vocabulary words but you should either make her older or tone it down a bit. Other than that, i love the story <3
          

Thanks for fanning :D