Hi Da-nee
I came across *A New Chapter* and I wanted to take a quiet moment to tell you how it stayed with me.
There is something very honest in the way you wrote Kanaya. The line, *"As a human being, he's indeed a good person. But is 'good' all you need?"* really lingered in my mind. It felt like more than a question in the story, it felt like something real people struggle with but rarely say out loud.
What touched me most is how you handled her inner conflict. It never felt forced or dramatic. It felt like watching someone carefully hold two truths at the same time. Her love for her faith and her unexpected feelings. That kind of emotional balance is not easy to write, but you did it in a very natural way.
At the same time, I couldn’t help but feel that a story like this deserves more attention than it is currently getting. It has a quiet depth that many readers would connect with, especially those who understand that kind of personal and spiritual struggle.
I am curious, have you published any of your work on Amazon or Goodreads yet?
If you are open to it, I would really enjoy having a short conversation with you about your writing and where you see this story going.
