@Phoenix_Blaze It's fine. Well first think of a good plot, what will happen at the beggining and then think how action will start. Example: A female character is going to school, then she meets a boy, he is mysterious(or smth idk) and then she starts being friends with him and she somehow finds out he is a drug dealer or is addicted to them.
When you have a plot, and writting the story check your grammar and spelling mistakes. When people see a lot of grammar mistakes they stop reading (because it makes usually people annoyed of simple mistakes(but a lot of them) and they not enjoying the story.)
Dont write short chapters.(This is one from myself bc when i read i usually dont like those kind of stories)
Write first chapter as interesting as you can. People usually after reading the first chapter(and second one) decides to continue or not.
Have a nice desceiption
A nice cover.
Thats all tips I can give you. I hope they can help you:)