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Literally, if I could get one critique... i'd write more.

@Darkangel1866 
          
          Thanks so much! Your story is very good! I think you do a great job of creating characters with actual personalities. Some many people focus too much on telling the story, that they forget to create characters.
          
          Anyway, can't wait to finish it!  And if you find time, please give mine a once over.. its not finished, and is only three pages, but no one has commented on it. I'm looking for positive/negative criticism. I basically want an honest answer on whether its even worth continuing. So, if ya can, i would be greatly appreciated. If not, no worries!

Thanks so much for becoming my fan! It's really appreciated. I can't wait to read all of your comments and feedback.
          ~Alex
          ps. I love your profile pic! thats so adorable!

@yulovemeonly: Thank you so much! And Yes, I will try to read your story. It would be helpful if you could read one that I have up.. Its just started, but I would like to know if its worth continuing. I thrive on criticism, so please, dont be shy!
          
          Story is called Fresh Meat.

Heyy...
          sorry to disturb your peace :P
          but could take few minutes to read my story called 'Give My Virginity Back" 
          8 chapters only
          (:
          Comment. Vote and Become Fan (if you love it)
          Feedback, criticism accepted.
          thank you
          yulovemeonly
          Thushara
          ps if you want me to read anything...it would be my pleasure...i try to get through every request