BIG NEWS; REVAMP COMPLETE
Ya'll... It happened.
After late nights, questionable snacks, and too much secondhand trauma from Shinobu roasting people- CHAPTERS 0, 1 AND 2 Have officially been revamped!
Yeah. Remember that story you thought couldn't get any better? Surprise.
What's new?
-Cleaner dialogue
-Actual world building
-More in-character comedy
-Stronger emotional beats
-Y/n is more of a relatable menace
-Shinobu is still scary (pray for Y/n)
-JUST COMPLETELY DIFFERENT OVER ALL.
THIS ISN'T JUST A POLISH. it's a level up. go reread the new versions and comment what you think.
More to come. Chapter 3,4,5 obv. And I'm NOT letting down this time.