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nakita mo na ba 'yung naging problema? 'Yang gamit mo, bago ba yan at ano 'yung ginawa mong 1 shot?

maxd01

'Murican story durn it!!!  I speak bad and worse 'Murican...  Hope you enjoy Seeing Eye Wolf.

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@maxd01 Hey, finally i get to finish your book and the first thing that i wanted to say is thank you. thank you for sharing a piece of your imagination and i really enjoyed reading it until the end.
            the surprising thing was, if you didn't even tell me that you are in fact a male, i wouldn't even know that fact. it was written in a good way possible and it was really out of the mainstream which is really good.
            thank you.
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@maxd01 Yeah and well, it is not really a surprise to know that there are male writers. It's just that is kind amusing. Good for you because I cannot even finish my on-going novels and there is no hope for it.
            
            Well, I am not really a fan of werewolf, let's just say I am kind of curious and it is a good thing to come across with your story.
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maxd01

I know, I swear most of the writers are females here.  I can tell by how they write.  There's a style to how they do it.  That and most of them are young.  Not all but many.
            
            Because I got so tired of the generic werewolf stories on this site.  I enjoyed writing that and some of my other WW stories.  Might take a look at the Bunny Bop Hop...  Snicker.
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Neosagi

Wow~ i don't know what to say, but I love your feedback my dear☺ sure, i will work more on my stories and i will also fix the typos. actually i noticed those problems also, it's just that i'm waiting for someone to notice it too. So yeah it is you dear, and I am very thankful for you and for giving me feedback~ thank you very much for the support ☺❤

Neosagi

@rescript sure, why not? you can pm  the lists to me. Thank you so muuch~
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@Neosagi  aaahh. you like tragic stories eh? haha no wonder you killed him. anyway, if you're interested, i can come up with a list that contains tragic stories that you can use as your own inspiration
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@Neosagi  hmm, no problem. so, you're working on some other stories, i hope to get a glimpse of it someday but not for now maybe. by that time, i am sure that you're already accomplish what you are entitled to and just like what i said or maybe not, oh well, you have the capability and capacity, you just have to improve on your own ways. anyway, there are a lots of room for improvement.
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CetrixThallium

Thank you for adding my story on your reading list  <3 

CetrixThallium

Ya!Kamsahamnida  :) <3 
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@CetrixThallium hey, well, i read your book's description and being me that is into action romance one, i hope that i will really enjoy reading this work of yours. oh, i saw my notifications for the first time from a long time and i was surprised on what you did. haha you gave me a red face though
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Neosagi

Thank you for adding CGG sa Reading lists mo~  i hope na magustuhan mo. Saranghaeyo~❤

Neosagi

@rescript Wow~ i don't know what to say, but I love your feedback my dear☺ sure, i will work more on my stories and i will also fix the typos. actually i noticed those problems also, it's just that i'm waiting for someone to notice it too. So yeah it is you dear, and I am very thankful for you and for giving me feedback~ thank you very much for the support ☺❤
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@Neosagi hi, i've already finished reading your work and i must say that you wrote it on a way it should be but the thing is, seriously? why did you kill him? haha anyway, minimized typo grammatical error is a good start and at the same time, a good characteristic of a write up
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MAgapito

Hello ☺️☺️ maraming salamat sa pag-add sa Finding Nemo's Sperm sa reading list mo ☺️☺️☺️

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Well, basing on how you reply on my messages, i think you can translate it or even nail some parts of it. Just be careful, haha you do want your readers to hold their dictionaries while reading this, right? Well, just so you know, i already encountered one and tell you, i struggle a little too much and in the end, well, i discontinued reading those. "You write to make you imaginations come into words and ypu post to share." Anyway, i'll look for a cardiologist to check if i do have one haha. 
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MAgapito

Nope...it's really good actually ☺️☺️☺️ i don't think so...you do have a heart ☺️☺️☺️ just you liking my work is already a proof for me ☺️☺️☺️ ohhh..same here...hahahaha..the english one is quiet hard at this point actually...hahahahaha...yeah I think I should substitute it sometime...but still need to look at it...anyway...i really am thankful for the feedbacks ❤️❤️❤️
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@MAgapito oh, haha i thought i made it rude, well i tend to be rude at the bottom of my mind haha yeah, i do not own a heart anyway. So, yeah, that's it,  i think i lost too much blood now haha.  By the way, you said, from one of the chaps that you were going to translate it in english, are you still pursuing it? Regarding to what i pointed out, namely, 'dito, ito, nito' i think you can just alter it by their names, which of course, should still be minimized. From what i read, you can do it in no time. Anyway, ja ne. 
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