NancyLane4
I love your story! It's got character and not entirely skipping scenes. You are detailed and I like that. I like the character development so far. This is not a boring story. I love the show this is based off of, and most WP stories are short, boring, and not descriptive. Keep going! And be unique. People crave it. I would love more. I would love to give you inspo.
rescripted4you
Thank you! I Appreciate your feedback back. I wanted to give him a different perspective. A reason to his attitude.