vatonic

Hi, I'm currently reading Eye of the Storm, and it's been really good so far but I made an observation. It seems like in some scenes you're a bit repetitive, using things like “But something sinks low in your chest anyway-uninvited, unwanted. Not jealousy. Not hurt.
          Just the irritation of being misread.
          Of being decided for.” You use this format quite a lot

rescripted4you

I know what you mean—that’s definitely a rhythm I fell into, in the earlier writing style for this story. 
            I appreciate you pointing it out.
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Suusieee_

Look I never write reviews but I think this story deserves it. This book is truly amazing. The characters have incredible depth even if they are already made by someone else and feel so real that I can’t help but connect with them on a deeper level. Each chapter pulls me in completely, making it feel less like I’m reading and more like I’m living inside the story. Please don’t stop writing because you are not only amazing at it but you make the reader (me) really look forward to the next chapter

rescripted4you

Thank you. Im glad you are connecting.
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NancyLane4

I love your story! It's got character and not entirely skipping scenes. You are detailed and I like that. I like the character development so far. This is not a boring story. I love the show this is based off of, and most WP stories are short, boring, and not descriptive. Keep going! And be unique. People crave it. I would love more. I would love to give you inspo.

rescripted4you

Thank you! I Appreciate your feedback back. I wanted to give him a different perspective. A reason to his attitude.
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