Wattpad Stories

Name: Love At First Sight ( Boom Sonic x Reader)
          
          Completed or ongoing: completed 
          
          Total chapters: 20 
          
          First chapter:
          Letting us know that this is their first wattpad story
          
          Last chapter:
          The rewritten version is out ( I’m not gonna read that shit) ( or am I? Idk)
          
          Total pages: 140
          
          Rating: -16/20
          
          Why that rating?:
          You know for an X Reader the “reader” was barely in it .
          
          This book doesn’t even have a proper ending and neither does the rewrite I’ve already checked and it hasn’t been updated since last year. Sonic doesn’t appear until later in the book and that means the first few chapters were build up to Y/n getting transferred to another universe and even those chapters barely had Y/n in it and they weren’t even that good which is where most of the points lost came from.
          
          The chapters that had Sonic in it was just sonic boom episodes that had Y/n say something once or twice but she hardly ever said anything . Sonic and Y/n had one or two romantic moments that’s it and that’s fine and all but I wished that there was just more interaction between Sonic and Y/n .
          
          This version of transferred to another dimension wasn’t really fleshed out well.  It didn’t make sense that Y/n wouldn’t try to find a way home to her family and friends . Now if she had a bad relationship with her family and had no friends then it would give her more of a motivation to stay instead of going home . If they had it where y/n is trying to find a way home and some other happens when that would the best way to do this story.
          
          Even then I feel like it would be better with a scientist like Tails ( which would be weird ) or Eggman but that’s just my opinion lololol.
          

Name: SANJI X READER : He thought I was a Boy
          
          Completed or ongoing: completed 
          
          Total chapters: 30
          
          First chapter:
          Introduction to Y/n chapter basically.
          
          Y/n is girl but her hair is short ( also brown) , she has no boobs, has devil fruit powers and lowkey go cray cray , and she also has only 1 girl friend who is her total opposite. Y/n is like a totallll Tomboyyy 
          
          Been going to one piece academy since kindergarten because no other school would accept her cause of her devil fruit and being cray cray .
          
          Last chapter:
          Talking about how they want to write a new story and they aren’t working on this book anymore . ( also more stuff that I’m not gonna get into) 
          
          Total pages: 175
          
          Rating: 4/20
          
          Why that rating?:
          The story had poor grammar it was so I got confused sometimes. Y/n was kinda weird like I didnt hate her or nothing she was just a little weird to me . 
          
          Sanji was kind of out of character some things that he did I don’t think he would actually do but then again I’m only on Thriller Bark but still I don’t think he would do some of the things on here.  This was kinda cringy but it was made in 2016 and most of the fanfiction at that time (especially on wattpad) were cringy .
          
          Also, Kid? I’m not far enough into One Piece to know his personality but like why was he like that in this? Is that how he is in the show? So many questions about that man.
          
          My wishes for this is I wish Sanji was a tad bit nicer to Y/n once he found out Y/n was a girl he was kinda a bitch which make kinda sense but whatever. I also wish there was more with the straw hats ( and I wish Chopper, Franky, Brook were in this) ( jinbe wasn’t apart of the crew at this time I don’t think) because they’re still like his family in this he literally lives with them , what you mean we barely have any interactions with them in this? 
          
          The story was unfinished due to some unfortunate circumstances and a wish to start a new project so the ending wasn’t really an ending, sadly.

Name: Roommate~ (Deadpool x Reader)
          
          Completed or ongoing: completed 
          
          Total chapters: 10
          
          First chapter:
          The chapter starts off with Y/n's wall exploding in her apartment and a guy in a red and black suit runs into her boobs (don't ask please). Y/n needs money to fix her apartment so she takes photos of Spider-Man for money but that leads her back to Deadpool so she shoots him a couple times and tries to kill him but fails , he asks how he could pay her back and she suggests her living with him until her apartment wall gets fixed.
          
          Last chapter:
          A battle between Y/n and Rex ( the guy who had a crush on Y/n at some point) which ends with him getting killed , Y/n takes Wade home after he got kidnapped , he's reunited with princess spidey and it ends with Y/n and Wade sharing their first kiss.
          
          Total pages: 97
          
          Rating: 51/20
          
          Why that rating?:
          I love me some Deadpool now.
          Glad that this had some Spider-Man cause I love me some spider man too.
          This was funny , I enjoyed Y/n and Wades relationship and I love their kitten Princess Spidey. The only two things I wished that happened was I wish we got a tad bit more of Y/n's backstory and I wish that we got that Deadpool being invited over to Aunt May's for dinner chapter .

Name: Trapped ( Pregame Ouma x ingame Shuichi) {COMPLETED!}
          
          Completed or ongoing: Completed 
          
          Total chapters: 16
          
          First chapter:
          Chapter starts off with Himiko trying to convince Kokichi to drink a potion , which he ends up dropping on the ground. When Himiko leaves Shuichi comes in and Kokichi asks Shuichi why does he think Himiko always wants him and only him to drink the potion and Shuichi says it’s probably because no one would really care about him if anything bad happened to him. Himiko comes back in and says Kokichi will regret dropping her potion and she said she cast a spell on him.
          
          Last chapter:
          Just a Authors note 
          
          Total pages: 83 
          
          Rating: 15/20 
          
          Why that rating?:
          It was a lot better than I thought it was gonna be . Does that mean it’s good? No but it wasn’t horrible, I just felt like there was barley any romance just Shuichi randomly thinking Kokichi looked cute and they didn’t really do much with Pregame Kokichi after the one class trial. I felt like the way they portrayed Kaito was inaccurate, I don’t think he would act like that and in the beginning they made Kaede a major crybaby. 
          
          The end was just abrupt , they found out Tsumugi was the mastermind and then Himiko got them out of there and then it all of the sudden flash forward and was like “ Me and Kokichi are dating, we do interviews now and Himiko and tenko are dating and they’re our neighbors “ and that was it so that made it lose points. But like I said it was too bad , it made me laugh a few times and there was one moment where I was like that’s cute but that’s about it.

Name: ⭐️ Reckless ~ mondo owada x reader ⭐️
          
          Completed or ongoing: completed 
          
          Total chapters: 34
          
          First chapter:
          The table of contents 
          
          Last chapter:
          Art that they made for the story 
          
          Total pages: 290
          
          Rating: 91/20
          
          Why that rating?:
            I think I just enjoy Mondo x Readers HAHAHHAHA.
            This one was really good and to be honest it has been a while since I’ve felt this good about a fanfic I’ve read in a long while. 
            The way the author writes Mondo is great , y/n is great, I loved Mondo’s friends/gang members , I enjoy Y/n’s siblings and I think they genuinely act like siblings . 
            Mondo’s and Y/n’s relationship was cute as hell they’re genuinely really good for each other ( or at least I think so personally), and with Y/n’s relationship with her brothers you can tell she genuinely cares for them ( and cares about those close to her in general).
            This book was also super funny, Mondo’s friends were hilarious and their interactions were funny, and I know not everyone think that vines are funny anymore (or certain ones at least ) but having a vine quote at the beginning of every chapter was just amazing , to me at least.
           I’m glad that I wasn’t siding with the antags in this ( cause Y/n and the other characters didn’t suck ass) so I’m happy I was actually able to sympathize and support Y/n ^^!
            I think this is all I really have to say about this one , I can’t really think about anything else to talk about cause I don’t really want to spoil anything just in case someone would want to read this one, speaking of which I feel like you should , it was really good and it was an enjoyable time and I hope, if you do read it, you enjoy it too!

Name: MUKURO IKUSABA X READER
          
          Completed or ongoing: completed 
          
          Total chapters: 19
          
          First chapter:
          Y/n is in the reserve course and funnily enough really reserved herself , she thinks she is rather boring and the only interesting thing about herself is her being into Mukuro Ikusaba while everyone is obsessed with her sister Junko Enoshima.
          
          Last chapter:
          Y/n and Mukuro are now dating , the bulling by her jealous classmates and the weird pictures have stopped. Y/n got introduced to Mukuro’s classmates finally , and apparently Junko has been pestering Mukuro about when Y/n and Mukuro will have their first kiss , so this ends with Mukuro and Y/n having their first kiss.
          
          Total pages: 76
          
          Rating: 22/20
          
          Why that rating?:
          This one was one of the more just okay books by Hello-dear , I have read a good bit of their books.  This is right under the Junko and Mondo one and above the Sayaka and Taka one personally . It was okay like a mentioned I felt like the ending was a little bit rushed so that made it lose points.

Name: serendipity // byakuya togami x reader
          
          Completed or ongoing: completed 
          
          Total chapters: 30
          
          First chapter:
          Y/n is the Ultimate Technician and it’s mostly about the day before and the morning of before going to hopes peak.
          
          Last chapter:
          Talking bout how they’re not in the DR fandom anymore and they don’t see them making anymore chapters for this book 
          
          Total pages: 237
          
          Rating: 8/20
          
          Why that rating?:
          It’s not as bad as the ratings makes it out to be it was pretty decent at first but some of the stuff they did later in the book I didn’t really like so I just gave it a bit of negatives .
          It was okay, it was definitely better than that one Byakuya x reader that got a -303 , it’s just that a lot of a characters were out of character (which I’m kind of lenient on ) and like there was a good bit of plot holes.

Name: Confessions-Saimota
          
          Completed or ongoing: completed 
          
          Total chapters: 7
          
          First chapter:
          Miu helps Shuichi practice confessing to Kaito
          
          Last chapter:
          They tell each other that they love one another and then they flash forward to after chapter 5
          
          Total pages: 47
          
          Rating: 13/20
          
          Why that rating?:
          It was meh but it wasn’t bad which is a plus .
          I most felt nothing reading this but I had a laugh and I thought they were gonna make Maki a bitch and they didn’t! My problems with it is where they started it which is after chapter 2 and they got right into it and I don’t like Miu so her being Shuichi’s bestie made me feel weird.
          
          This would be better as a one-shot than a book but it wasn’t bad I wouldn’t be shocked if someone liked it a lot cause it didn’t do too terribly on characterization .

Name: Luck and Poetry ( Nagito X Reader)
          
          Completed or ongoing: completed 
          
          Total chapters: 36
          
          First chapter:
          A slightly different rendition of the beginning chapter of danganronpa 2
          
          Last chapter:
          Y/n tries to find ways to cure Nagito’s diseases and Nagito reassure her that he (probably) won’t ever die cause of his luck . Then Nagito says he also has Y/n a gift and then he proposes .
          
          Total pages: 457
          
          Rating: 64/20
          
          Why that rating?:
          I may have miss counted when doing the rating but idk  but this story was good it kept me entertained and I enjoyed they changed our stuff was so it wasn’t like I was just reading Danganronpa 2 so I never really knew what was gonna happen half of the time.
          
          I also thought it was funny and the characters most of the time were in character which is impressive and the flashbacks were great .
          
          The only two problems I had , and this is gonna sound weird considering what this story is and how highly rated it is , but Nagito and Y/n were lowkey toxic as hell T_T, especially during the danganronpa 2 stuff like he was clearly manipulating her and he was being a ass , he was better in flashback stuff but either way they were toxic , but they ain’t the worst couple I’ve seen. And the other problem is all the banging I never had to think about Nagito’s Ultimate Hope this much before reading this story, but considering the fact the smut wasn’t bad .
          
          Good story , you should read if you kinda want a different version of DR2 .
          

Name: can you say you love me? - Peko pekoyama
          
          Completed or ongoing: completed 
          
          Total chapters:13
          
          First chapter:
          It’s a chapter that said the same thing as the description.
          
          Last chapter:
          Y/n is dead and Peko is sad 
          
          Total pages: 15
          
          Rating: 18/20
          
          Why that rating?:
          It went fast . It was barely even a story but I didn’t really do anything that I didnt like or dislike so it was very plain .