Wattpad Stories

Name: Yasuhiro hagakure x reader
          
          Completed or ongoing: ongoing
          
          Total chapters: 6
          
          First chapter:
           Y/n moved into a new nice Japanese house (their words) with their annoying ass friend Luna. Luna finds a fortune teller and tells Y/n to go and Y/n says no. Then they introduce 3 more friends who have the whitest names minus one of them and they’re equally annoying . Hiro magically appears and Y/n’s annoying friends convinces her to go get hot fortune told and hiro tells her that she will find her soulmate in this town. Y/n goes back to her friends and tells them what Hiro told her and they say Hiro is Y/n’s soulmate and that they ship them .
          
          Last chapter:
          Y/n was supposed to fight someone in this chapter but for some reason they wrote like 2 seconds of it but that’s it .
          
          Total pages: 22
          
          Rating: 1/20
          
          Why that rating?:
          I didn’t like how the dialogue was written. I didn’t like how they had random written out emoji’s like the Lenny face . Y/n’s friends were annoying. This just sucked lowkey like not enjoyable one bit . It was written in 2020 but the dialogue would make you think it was written in 2016.
          

Name: William Afton x Reader // Neighbors :)
          
          Completed or ongoing: completed 
          
          Total chapters: 26
          
          First chapter:
          The Afton’s move in next door to Y/n and her parents (she’s 19 according to chapter 2) and we find out that Y/n thinks William Afton is a Dilf. Y/n and her parents go over to meet the Afton’s. Micheal shows Y/n around their house and Micheal leaves for a moment to see what his mom wants and then a freshly showered William Afton in a white tank top and boxers (?) if I’m remembering correctly comes out and freaks out when he sees an unknown person in his house. Y/n freaks out also so she grabs her parents and sprints out the Afton house .
          
          Random chapter update: 
          Micheal, yo daddy tryna fuck me 
          
          Last chapter:
          William thinks Y/n is fucking his son Micheal so he freaks out and carves his initials on Y/n and locks her in his basement while she possibly bleeds to death.
          
          Total pages: 223
          
          Rating: 5/20
          
          Why that rating?:
          Despite the rating, it wasn’t that bad. It was actually pretty well written the only reason why it’s so low is cause William Afton scares me and I don’t like the idea of a 19 year old( let alone a 19 year old that’s supposed to be ME) dating him. If I was Y/n I would’ve chose Micheal instead because he was more sane and also 2 years younger than Y/n unlike his dad who was like 11 years older and a child killer. I know Y/n didn’t know he killed children until the last two chapters but a 35 year old man willing to date a 19 year old is enough of a red flag personally. William Afton is a man child that likes to kill children, probably the reason why your wife left you. The ending was realistic for him though so yeah. It’s probably one of the best William Afton fanfics I will read so yeah , it was alright. 

Name: Immortal ~ Saiki K. • Reader
          
          Completed or ongoing:completed
          
          Total chapters: 13 
          
          First chapter:
          Y/n is new to the school and is also a psychic like Saiki. She’s in the same class also and she couldn’t care less about Teruhashi and says she looks average.  Most of the chapter is Y/n and Saiki in a cafe talking about coffee jelly pretty much and I think Y/n is already starting to have a crush on Saiki.
          
          Last chapter:
          The class goes on a field trip for spring break but none of them except Saiki, Y/n, Aiura, and Toritsuka knows that the world is going to end. The chapter is about random things and is finally about the world ending the last 3 pages . The ending of this book is all of them dying (jokingly)
          
          Total pages: 80
          
          Rating: 7/20
          
          Why that rating?:
          The story was alright but it was boring. It never kept me engaged and I didn’t like Saiki and Y/n relationship romantically, I feel like they would be better as friends. Their romantic relationship felt kind of forced too which is probably the reason why I didn’t like their developing romance. I felt like Y/n wasn’t fleshed out enough there was still a lot about her we didn’t know and we didn’t even get to know all of her powers that I felt she would be fine without. 
          
          There is a second book since Saiki and Y/n aren’t actually dead (sorry, spoilers) but there’s only 1 chapter and it hasn’t been updated since August of 2023 so I’m not gonna read it. This wasn’t a horrible story, I’ve read worse but it’s not much of anything either. But if you’re a fan of Saiki maybe you’ll like it more than me. 

Name: Love At First Sight ( Boom Sonic x Reader)
          
          Completed or ongoing: completed 
          
          Total chapters: 20 
          
          First chapter:
          Letting us know that this is their first wattpad story
          
          Last chapter:
          The rewritten version is out ( I’m not gonna read that shit) ( or am I? Idk)
          
          Total pages: 140
          
          Rating: -16/20
          
          Why that rating?:
          You know for an X Reader the “reader” was barely in it .
          
          This book doesn’t even have a proper ending and neither does the rewrite I’ve already checked and it hasn’t been updated since last year. Sonic doesn’t appear until later in the book and that means the first few chapters were build up to Y/n getting transferred to another universe and even those chapters barely had Y/n in it and they weren’t even that good which is where most of the points lost came from.
          
          The chapters that had Sonic in it was just sonic boom episodes that had Y/n say something once or twice but she hardly ever said anything . Sonic and Y/n had one or two romantic moments that’s it and that’s fine and all but I wished that there was just more interaction between Sonic and Y/n .
          
          This version of transferred to another dimension wasn’t really fleshed out well.  It didn’t make sense that Y/n wouldn’t try to find a way home to her family and friends . Now if she had a bad relationship with her family and had no friends then it would give her more of a motivation to stay instead of going home . If they had it where y/n is trying to find a way home and some other happens when that would the best way to do this story.
          
          Even then I feel like it would be better with a scientist like Tails ( which would be weird ) or Eggman but that’s just my opinion lololol.
          

Name: SANJI X READER : He thought I was a Boy
          
          Completed or ongoing: completed 
          
          Total chapters: 30
          
          First chapter:
          Introduction to Y/n chapter basically.
          
          Y/n is girl but her hair is short ( also brown) , she has no boobs, has devil fruit powers and lowkey go cray cray , and she also has only 1 girl friend who is her total opposite. Y/n is like a totallll Tomboyyy 
          
          Been going to one piece academy since kindergarten because no other school would accept her cause of her devil fruit and being cray cray .
          
          Last chapter:
          Talking about how they want to write a new story and they aren’t working on this book anymore . ( also more stuff that I’m not gonna get into) 
          
          Total pages: 175
          
          Rating: 4/20
          
          Why that rating?:
          The story had poor grammar it was so I got confused sometimes. Y/n was kinda weird like I didnt hate her or nothing she was just a little weird to me . 
          
          Sanji was kind of out of character some things that he did I don’t think he would actually do but then again I’m only on Thriller Bark but still I don’t think he would do some of the things on here.  This was kinda cringy but it was made in 2016 and most of the fanfiction at that time (especially on wattpad) were cringy .
          
          Also, Kid? I’m not far enough into One Piece to know his personality but like why was he like that in this? Is that how he is in the show? So many questions about that man.
          
          My wishes for this is I wish Sanji was a tad bit nicer to Y/n once he found out Y/n was a girl he was kinda a bitch which make kinda sense but whatever. I also wish there was more with the straw hats ( and I wish Chopper, Franky, Brook were in this) ( jinbe wasn’t apart of the crew at this time I don’t think) because they’re still like his family in this he literally lives with them , what you mean we barely have any interactions with them in this? 
          
          The story was unfinished due to some unfortunate circumstances and a wish to start a new project so the ending wasn’t really an ending, sadly.

Name: Roommate~ (Deadpool x Reader)
          
          Completed or ongoing: completed 
          
          Total chapters: 10
          
          First chapter:
          The chapter starts off with Y/n's wall exploding in her apartment and a guy in a red and black suit runs into her boobs (don't ask please). Y/n needs money to fix her apartment so she takes photos of Spider-Man for money but that leads her back to Deadpool so she shoots him a couple times and tries to kill him but fails , he asks how he could pay her back and she suggests her living with him until her apartment wall gets fixed.
          
          Last chapter:
          A battle between Y/n and Rex ( the guy who had a crush on Y/n at some point) which ends with him getting killed , Y/n takes Wade home after he got kidnapped , he's reunited with princess spidey and it ends with Y/n and Wade sharing their first kiss.
          
          Total pages: 97
          
          Rating: 51/20
          
          Why that rating?:
          I love me some Deadpool now.
          Glad that this had some Spider-Man cause I love me some spider man too.
          This was funny , I enjoyed Y/n and Wades relationship and I love their kitten Princess Spidey. The only two things I wished that happened was I wish we got a tad bit more of Y/n's backstory and I wish that we got that Deadpool being invited over to Aunt May's for dinner chapter .

Name: Trapped ( Pregame Ouma x ingame Shuichi) {COMPLETED!}
          
          Completed or ongoing: Completed 
          
          Total chapters: 16
          
          First chapter:
          Chapter starts off with Himiko trying to convince Kokichi to drink a potion , which he ends up dropping on the ground. When Himiko leaves Shuichi comes in and Kokichi asks Shuichi why does he think Himiko always wants him and only him to drink the potion and Shuichi says it’s probably because no one would really care about him if anything bad happened to him. Himiko comes back in and says Kokichi will regret dropping her potion and she said she cast a spell on him.
          
          Last chapter:
          Just a Authors note 
          
          Total pages: 83 
          
          Rating: 15/20 
          
          Why that rating?:
          It was a lot better than I thought it was gonna be . Does that mean it’s good? No but it wasn’t horrible, I just felt like there was barley any romance just Shuichi randomly thinking Kokichi looked cute and they didn’t really do much with Pregame Kokichi after the one class trial. I felt like the way they portrayed Kaito was inaccurate, I don’t think he would act like that and in the beginning they made Kaede a major crybaby. 
          
          The end was just abrupt , they found out Tsumugi was the mastermind and then Himiko got them out of there and then it all of the sudden flash forward and was like “ Me and Kokichi are dating, we do interviews now and Himiko and tenko are dating and they’re our neighbors “ and that was it so that made it lose points. But like I said it was too bad , it made me laugh a few times and there was one moment where I was like that’s cute but that’s about it.

Name: ⭐️ Reckless ~ mondo owada x reader ⭐️
          
          Completed or ongoing: completed 
          
          Total chapters: 34
          
          First chapter:
          The table of contents 
          
          Last chapter:
          Art that they made for the story 
          
          Total pages: 290
          
          Rating: 91/20
          
          Why that rating?:
            I think I just enjoy Mondo x Readers HAHAHHAHA.
            This one was really good and to be honest it has been a while since I’ve felt this good about a fanfic I’ve read in a long while. 
            The way the author writes Mondo is great , y/n is great, I loved Mondo’s friends/gang members , I enjoy Y/n’s siblings and I think they genuinely act like siblings . 
            Mondo’s and Y/n’s relationship was cute as hell they’re genuinely really good for each other ( or at least I think so personally), and with Y/n’s relationship with her brothers you can tell she genuinely cares for them ( and cares about those close to her in general).
            This book was also super funny, Mondo’s friends were hilarious and their interactions were funny, and I know not everyone think that vines are funny anymore (or certain ones at least ) but having a vine quote at the beginning of every chapter was just amazing , to me at least.
           I’m glad that I wasn’t siding with the antags in this ( cause Y/n and the other characters didn’t suck ass) so I’m happy I was actually able to sympathize and support Y/n ^^!
            I think this is all I really have to say about this one , I can’t really think about anything else to talk about cause I don’t really want to spoil anything just in case someone would want to read this one, speaking of which I feel like you should , it was really good and it was an enjoyable time and I hope, if you do read it, you enjoy it too!

Name: MUKURO IKUSABA X READER
          
          Completed or ongoing: completed 
          
          Total chapters: 19
          
          First chapter:
          Y/n is in the reserve course and funnily enough really reserved herself , she thinks she is rather boring and the only interesting thing about herself is her being into Mukuro Ikusaba while everyone is obsessed with her sister Junko Enoshima.
          
          Last chapter:
          Y/n and Mukuro are now dating , the bulling by her jealous classmates and the weird pictures have stopped. Y/n got introduced to Mukuro’s classmates finally , and apparently Junko has been pestering Mukuro about when Y/n and Mukuro will have their first kiss , so this ends with Mukuro and Y/n having their first kiss.
          
          Total pages: 76
          
          Rating: 22/20
          
          Why that rating?:
          This one was one of the more just okay books by Hello-dear , I have read a good bit of their books.  This is right under the Junko and Mondo one and above the Sayaka and Taka one personally . It was okay like a mentioned I felt like the ending was a little bit rushed so that made it lose points.

Name: serendipity // byakuya togami x reader
          
          Completed or ongoing: completed 
          
          Total chapters: 30
          
          First chapter:
          Y/n is the Ultimate Technician and it’s mostly about the day before and the morning of before going to hopes peak.
          
          Last chapter:
          Talking bout how they’re not in the DR fandom anymore and they don’t see them making anymore chapters for this book 
          
          Total pages: 237
          
          Rating: 8/20
          
          Why that rating?:
          It’s not as bad as the ratings makes it out to be it was pretty decent at first but some of the stuff they did later in the book I didn’t really like so I just gave it a bit of negatives .
          It was okay, it was definitely better than that one Byakuya x reader that got a -303 , it’s just that a lot of a characters were out of character (which I’m kind of lenient on ) and like there was a good bit of plot holes.