I am a father, a husband and an accountant.  I mostly listen to stories anymore due to this however I have always enjoyed a good story. I am trying my hand at a few myself but at best I am a novice writer. At worst I am the guy who forgets how the story goes around the campfire and just tells the last line expecting the shocked faces.

Criticism is encouraged, I would love to be able to enhance my writing ability and notes on my writing style or verbiage, would help tremendously.