I have read your feedback on Horror Hill. Don't know if there is different etiquette where you come from, but usually if someone asks you to do feedback on something, you focus on the positive feedback - your comments were all negative. If I was nit-picking like you, I could have said a whole lot more about your book, but where I come from, I try and find the best in people's stories. Hope you understand for next time when someone asks you to give them feedback (it usually means they want positive feedback with a hint of improvement). Thanks.