reynoldsbliss

@4alimitedtime , no problem, you are a great  writer! And i plan on pitting up a new poem today!

4alimitedtime

@reynoldsbliss lol cool ur beans, it's all good:) my fav so far is lifes gamble, I did a critiuge like u asked but I don't know how helpful it wil be(I'm the worst judge everX/)as for what you can do better: perfect your voice so that it shines through the piece...that's what I've been trying to do, anywayXDyour  welcome a million!

reynoldsbliss

At for a limited time, thanks, that means a lot, what is ur fave so far, and I don't mind the q's, my friends at school think I am the human encyclopedia so, it is no different. I would like to know what I can do better if you have any critics! Thanks a million.