a_username_lils

I've been reading ur coffee shop book thing, it's quite nice but what is the goal? Like, yeah I get that the obvious goal is to be the best coffee shop, but a story without a plot kinda makes the reader uninterested.
          I quite enjoy the book and I don't want to put it down because of it being to boring.
          like I get really confused and skip most of the chapter because the main character is constantly having to explain things over and over again.
          Me not liking the plot and the writing style is probably because of my preferences but please remember, this is just my opinion. And, I'm not a good writer so I'm in no position to speak.

a_username_lils

@rezaareal Quick question, why is the book cover a girl with horns?
            is she the MC or not? 'cause if she is then why does she have horns, isn't she human?
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a_username_lils

True, you have a good point.
            I didn't read the synopsis so I'm wrong. But as a reader, I find it a bit boring, but that is probably because of the kind of books I like reading.
             I only assumed that the goal was to be the best coffee shop because it said so somewhere in one of the chapters. Also, the way of speaking made me very confused so thank you for doing the 'translation'.
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rezaareal

@a_username_lils Thanks for your feedback, but have you read the title and the synopsis? In the last synopsis, it says, "This is the story of me sharing my thoughts of the modern world with the creatures of the fantasy world." So, basically, you interpret the goal of the series. The goal isn't to be the best coffee shop but to share a thought. The plot is mainly focused on explaining what is around the main character, and its slice of life, basically, the plot is minimal to change. The series is an image of me with my friends when we gathered together and talked about anything. Or like a game named Coffee Talk. So there is no heavy plot here...And I tried to interpret anything that is in fantasy into modern knowledge or what we understand. I read a lot about magic and fantasy background, they don't explain details like it's because of the mana. So I want to explore how everything works in fantasy and magic, an example is Dryad, I read and saw a lot of literature depicting Dryad as human, yet in my mind, what is inside Dryad's body, is their body worked like a human? Or is Dryad aware of Naiad or other nymphs? So "the story of me sharing my thoughts of the modern world with the creatures of the fantasy world."
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