rhetoricRagdoll

Damn, been long since I posted anything at all now that I wonder
          	I'll drop another shitty poem rfn

rhetoricRagdoll

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I had this poem written for such a long time, but just due to a little error it forever stayed in my notebook. Well i found it recently and corrected it and here i present another piece of shit 
          Will be glad if you all gave it a try
          Sure check out on my profile if you can
          It's named "Swain"
          Have a good day :)

rhetoricRagdoll

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So I just typed my new poem and uff, it's time taking :/
          I hope someone takes time to just read it out and maybe tell how it is, I know it's shit but hearing it from someone else is a different kind of motivation, thanks and have a great day y'all

SimplyRogue

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@Dismaltrance What's your definition of 'shit'?
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rhetoricRagdoll

Also, how to stop being obsessed with someone? 
          If anyone could help, I need it for real so any thoughts and suggestions are welcome open arms
          Please, help, I do need it desperately and I can't even explain how much

rhetoricRagdoll

@SimplyRogue THISSS, is giving me anxiety attacks
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SimplyRogue

@Dismaltrance depends on how close you are with the person you are obsessing over. maybe the other person could be obsessing over you too. who knows
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rhetoricRagdoll

A girl was walking down the street back home late night when two creeps started following her.
          
          After a few steps, one guy got real close and whispered, "don't you fear while being out late night in winter surrounded by opaque fog?"
          
          The girl said, "yeah, I did, back then, when I was alive..."
          
          Have a great day y'all