rhi6666

my first book will be completed either tonight or tomorrow hopefully tonight! 
          ~~ the dogs life~~

The dogs life is the first story i have ever write! please comment below if you enjoyed it im only on chapter 3 so there will be more of the story shortly please tell me if you like it or not ( i wont get offended)  i just want your feedback and if you dont like it please tell me how i can improve it?
          thanks