rhicyphert

Hey I'm posting new chapters and I changed the intro to my story The Oasis . The chapters I'm putting up are rough and basic. So please I'm looking for comments on the story line and not the grammar and spelling. I've been struggling with direction and I'm looking for insight.

rhicyphert

Hey I'm posting new chapters and I changed the intro to my story The Oasis . The chapters I'm putting up are rough and basic. So please I'm looking for comments on the story line and not the grammar and spelling. I've been struggling with direction and I'm looking for insight.

The-Scrivener

Thanks Rhi. for putting  I'm a Cyborg's Pet  on to your reading list. Reading that again it looks a bit weird. but as new authors still get a real boost every time someone comes across our work. Hope you enjoy the book. 
           Hugs RK+Reb
          
          ps keep writing never stop.