richardlgibson9

Heeeey. Finally got off my butt and checked out your story. I liked it, but man, does it need some work. The reworked chapter 1 was great. I wanna see more stuff like that, man. 
          
          So, now that I've checked out your story, why don't you look at mine, hm?

ay, people I just redid chapter 1 and I hope y'all like it

Thabks for following! :D

thanks for the follow :)

tell me what u think of it

Hello my name is Richard Gibson I'm 17 , I always been interested in writing and I have friends who have inspired me to write more and tell the stories that haunts my mind , tells what you think of my stories and give points if you want and thank u