so idk i wanna get better at writing since i'm taking university courses for english writing next year and i dunno tell me your feed back on this prompt.
She was the universe. The stars shining bright in the night sky, the taste of honey suckle during those clear sky days. She was the earth, the waves crashing upon the beach in the blazing sun rays, the grass swaying in the warm summer breeze, the snow falling gently like feathers. She was a hurricane, winds blowing violently, rain piercing the planets surface, the grey clouds looming over the surface of the land. She was sweet like sugar, the was the hell in hello, she was the good in goodbye and the love in lovely